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TR101AL
 Post subject: Night-Force Shockwave wip (updated 12/27/07)
PostPosted: Tue Dec 25, 2007 9:13 pm 
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I haven't posted a wip in a while, and all things considered this custom could be done. Just a few thoughts for you guys to give me feedback on. Should I leave the arms as they are or sculpt thicker sleeves? Does he need a bit od drybrushing to show the details or like the original just leave him alone? Any feedback is as always greatly appreciated!


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Tanstoys
 Post subject: Re: Night-Force Shockwave wip
PostPosted: Tue Dec 25, 2007 9:42 pm 

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I think he looks alright, but I haven't seen a NF shockwave before. The green vest is odd looking sort of so paint it black possibly and add some detail painting and it's good,
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The Spectre
 Post subject: Re: Night-Force Shockwave wip
PostPosted: Tue Dec 25, 2007 10:09 pm 
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Looks pretty good so far!

Are you going to do the camo on the arms and legs?

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AdrienVeidt
 Post subject: Re: Night-Force Shockwave wip
PostPosted: Wed Dec 26, 2007 12:35 am 
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Yeah, the green of the vest has to go. The camo would also suffice to spruce it up as well, negating the need for blackwashing.

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TR101AL
 Post subject: Re: Night-Force Shockwave wip
PostPosted: Thu Dec 27, 2007 4:28 pm 
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Thanks for the feedback. I felt like something didn't look quite right myself. Thought the original NFSW had a green vest, it just stuck out on this figure. I decided to go a different way with him. In my Joe-verse, NF and D.E.F. are a combined unit. I had previously made a custom of the character Rapid-Fire (http://www.joecustoms.com/customs/custo ... 80&id=7129) and listed SW as his superior. So I decided to go this avenue. Let me know what you think...Urban Response Force Shock-wave!

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Tanstoys
 Post subject: Re: Night-Force Shockwave wip (updated 12/27/07)
PostPosted: Thu Dec 27, 2007 5:15 pm 

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I like this, The camo and the lining on the shirt is really cool. Good job.... :-D
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Keenan
 Post subject: Re: Night-Force Shockwave wip (updated 12/27/07)
PostPosted: Thu Dec 27, 2007 6:38 pm 
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Very cool looking figure.

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gijoey
 Post subject: Re: Night-Force Shockwave wip (updated 12/27/07)
PostPosted: Thu Dec 27, 2007 8:56 pm 
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That turned out really damn nice. Sweet camo.
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