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army of darkness
 Post subject: Snow Serpent (WIP)
PostPosted: Tue Aug 07, 2007 6:10 am 

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Hello one and all. This Snow Serpent figure is still a WIP but it is nearly finished.That's a modded '83 Snow Job head on a '85 SS body. I am going to add some color to the fur pelt and gloves and redo the hood all white I think. I'll define the mask a bit more too. Anyhow I would be interested to hear your thoughts and suggestions so critique away!
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Viper
 Post subject: Re: Snow Serpent (WIP)
PostPosted: Tue Aug 07, 2007 7:14 am 
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I like him as is. Not sure what you'll do to define the mask more, but I'd leave the hood alone. Looks good that way, breaks up all the white.
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Keenan
 Post subject: Re: Snow Serpent (WIP)
PostPosted: Tue Aug 07, 2007 7:37 am 
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I like the fact that he has a real world look to him. Very cool.

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 Post subject: Re: Snow Serpent (WIP)
PostPosted: Tue Aug 07, 2007 7:51 am 
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Im with Viper, I kind of like him as is. Very nice!!!

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Matthew
 Post subject: Re: Snow Serpent (WIP)
PostPosted: Tue Aug 07, 2007 9:05 am 
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oooo, very nice looking.

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crowncoke
 Post subject: Re: Snow Serpent (WIP)
PostPosted: Tue Aug 07, 2007 9:15 am 

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He looks great as is.

If you wanted to change him up a little, then try using a light to medium grey for the trim. Maybe even do the mask in grey, that might help to bring out details. On the hood, you could do it in white and give it a real light wash of brown - that would give it the feel that Polar bears have.

But those are just my cracked ideas, I still think he looks awsome AS IS.
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Lev
 Post subject: Re: Snow Serpent (WIP)
PostPosted: Tue Aug 07, 2007 10:47 am 
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All I can suggest is to not change him. He looks great.
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roguetiger
 Post subject: Re: Snow Serpent (WIP)
PostPosted: Tue Aug 07, 2007 1:42 pm 
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I agree with everyone that it looks perfect as is. What did you make the mask out of or what is it from? I agree with leaving the hood as is as well.

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 Post subject: Re: Snow Serpent (WIP)
PostPosted: Tue Aug 07, 2007 4:09 pm 
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Matthew wrote:
oooo, very nice looking.

Ditto, very cool take on the Snow Serpent
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army of darkness
 Post subject: Re: Snow Serpent (WIP)
PostPosted: Sun Aug 12, 2007 6:14 am 

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roguetiger wrote:
I agree with everyone that it looks perfect as is. What did you make the mask out of or what is it from? I agree with leaving the hood as is as well.

The mask is non-removable and made out of greenstuff modelling putty.

Thank you all for taking the time to post your thoughts and suggestions. I will try and post a picture of the finished work when I can. Bye for now.
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