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captain tomorrow
 Post subject: Civilian
PostPosted: Mon Aug 06, 2007 11:24 am 
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Matthew
 Post subject: Re: Civilian
PostPosted: Mon Aug 06, 2007 11:34 am 
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Not bad.

A request though. Could you please post some of these together? You have 8 posts in 2 days in the Critiques forum. I know I almost skipped over these because they are in multiple threads.

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captain tomorrow
 Post subject: Re: Civilian
PostPosted: Mon Aug 06, 2007 11:40 am 
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Will do Matt. I kind of think of him as a hostage for Cobra or just a guy running away from something.

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Lev
 Post subject: Re: Civilian
PostPosted: Mon Aug 06, 2007 2:17 pm 
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I don't know, that torso seems very out of proportion to those legs. Maybe if you had a different torso or legs.

Not a bad idea though. A civilian figure that is.
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raptor
 Post subject: Re: Civilian
PostPosted: Mon Aug 06, 2007 2:21 pm 
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I've got a hard time seeing a guy with two leg holsters as a civilian.

Might be because I'm Canadian though.

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Kilcarr
 Post subject: Re: Civilian
PostPosted: Mon Aug 06, 2007 5:57 pm 
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So, you would have three holsters?

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captain tomorrow
 Post subject: Re: Civilian
PostPosted: Tue Aug 07, 2007 11:54 am 
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Levantine wrote:
I don't know, that torso seems very out of proportion to those legs. Maybe if you had a different torso or legs.

Not a bad idea though. A civilian figure that is.


I sort of tried to make him slightly out of shape compared to the peak-of-human-perfection the Joes have. That's why he has no muscles and a big torso.

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Hulk Hogan
 Post subject: Re: Civilian
PostPosted: Tue Aug 07, 2007 12:09 pm 

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I have a great name for this civilian...General Yesterday.

Great work, but since when do civilians wear holsters?

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captain tomorrow
 Post subject: Re: Civilian
PostPosted: Tue Aug 07, 2007 12:42 pm 
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He has the holsters as protection because he probably lives in Springfield, but doesn't want to follow Cobra rule, or he may just live in a bad neighborhood such as Compton or Detroit, where there are lots of gangs and criminals. He may try to lead a rebellion against Cobra, or eventually join the Joes later as a sleeper agent or something.

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narceron
 Post subject: Re: Civilian
PostPosted: Tue Aug 07, 2007 7:33 pm 
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yeah, ditch the holsters and he's a hostage, otherwise, write up a cool back story, ;)

Good stuff,man, keep it up.

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