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General Hawk
 Post subject: Episode 10 of Ghosts is up
PostPosted: Wed May 14, 2008 3:10 pm 
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Two weeks have gone by, and Episode 10 of Ghosts is posted.

A couple of notes:

- There are only two more chapters in this story, and it's pretty much a lead up to the "Grand Finale" of the GeneralsJoes dio-story universe. I'll warn you up front, I've got huuuuuge things in my head for the finale, but time will tell how long it takes me and if I'll be able to pull off what I want.

- There's quite a bit of dialog and exposition in the remaining chapters and not a ton of action. Again, mostly a lead up to the larger story still to come, hope the chapters still satisfy.

Thanks for checking it out.

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Kilcarr
 Post subject: Re: Episode 10 of Ghosts is up
PostPosted: Wed May 14, 2008 3:31 pm 
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Wow, good stuff. I know there wasnt a lot of action here but there sure was a lot of attention. Whether it was between or .

I do have one question though.....


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 Post subject: Re: Episode 10 of Ghosts is up
PostPosted: Wed May 14, 2008 5:51 pm 
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Solid chapter. :-D

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 Post subject: Re: Episode 10 of Ghosts is up
PostPosted: Wed May 14, 2008 8:18 pm 
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General Hawk wrote:
Two weeks have gone by, and Episode 10 of Ghosts is posted.

A couple of notes:

- There are only two more chapters in this story, and it's pretty much a lead up to the "Grand Finale" of the GeneralsJoes dio-story universe. I'll warn you up front, I've got huuuuuge things in my head for the finale, but time will tell how long it takes me and if I'll be able to pull off what I want.

- There's quite a bit of dialog and exposition in the remaining chapters and not a ton of action. Again, mostly a lead up to the larger story still to come, hope the chapters still satisfy.

Thanks for checking it out.


Aaaaaaaaand why is the end? you can do something whenever you want...nobody is running after you to make diostories all the time...( :shifty: at this moment...)

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Chief
 Post subject: Re: Episode 10 of Ghosts is up
PostPosted: Wed May 14, 2008 8:23 pm 
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Another solid chapter, Justin! :D

My only question is:

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Kilcarr
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Chief wrote:
Another solid chapter, Justin! :D

My only question is:



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 Post subject: Re: Episode 10 of Ghosts is up
PostPosted: Thu May 15, 2008 12:08 am 
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You know I've got no problem with a lot of dialogue when it's good and furthers the story, and this fits the bill.

No need to preface this kind of quality with any kind of apology.

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General Hawk
 Post subject: Re: Episode 10 of Ghosts is up
PostPosted: Thu May 15, 2008 8:26 am 
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Thanks, guys!

Kil -

Chief -

Glad you guys liked the chapter.

Justin

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PostPosted: Thu May 15, 2008 11:18 pm 
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Great chapter man. I am really enjoying the direction the Renegades are taking and the interaction between Falcon and Duke - Great job as always

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PostPosted: Fri Jun 20, 2008 5:25 pm 
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I LOVE the build-up. It really does feel like something HUGE is about to happen.

Congrats!

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