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 Post subject: QUICK KICK MY 2ND TAKE updated
PostPosted: Tue May 27, 2008 7:11 pm 
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HEY ALL HERES MY 2ND TAKE ON QK SO LET ME KNOW WHAT YOU THINK THANKS X

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 Post subject: Re: QUICK KICK MY 2ND TAKE
PostPosted: Tue May 27, 2008 7:30 pm 
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I like the first one a little better, something's really off with that torso on the second one. Why did you make it so long, I think if it was left alone and not made so long it would look a little better.

I like the belt that you sculpted over the chest, that looks cool, but that brown nipple scares me :bawling:


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 Post subject: Re: QUICK KICK MY 2ND TAKE
PostPosted: Tue May 27, 2008 7:50 pm 
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He still looks like he's wearing a shirt (you know, the kind that looks like a nude torso).

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 Post subject: Re: QUICK KICK MY 2ND TAKE
PostPosted: Tue May 27, 2008 8:19 pm 
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thanks guys for the feedback. john i hear you ill try to fix it.
SPM i went with a longer torso as if i didnt he would have monkey arms. but ill try and see what i can do.
thanks agin X

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 Post subject: Re: QUICK KICK MY 2ND TAKE
PostPosted: Tue May 27, 2008 9:13 pm 

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nice paint job on him X, I like this head on the 2nd QK. Like john said the torso doesn't look like a bare chest though, otherwise he's good


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 Post subject: Re: QUICK KICK MY 2ND TAKE updated
PostPosted: Wed May 28, 2008 2:00 pm 
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Thanks tim ok i fixed the chest and eyes. let me know what you think thanks X

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 Post subject: Re: QUICK KICK MY 2ND TAKE updated
PostPosted: Wed May 28, 2008 2:26 pm 
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Well, there still is something with those nipples. (that sounds weird!? 8-O )
Other than that, he rocks like hell! The removable belt is awesome!

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 Post subject: Re: QUICK KICK MY 2ND TAKE updated
PostPosted: Wed May 28, 2008 3:04 pm 
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I think the chest looks like you're just cutting into the sculpting compound and that's it, so that's why it doesn't look right. If it was sculpted a little better, and didn't look like lines I think it'd look a lot better. Maybe go over it with a dremel sanding head(the one shaped like a cone) to widen the defined muscle area a little or some how get away from "cutting" the area with an exacto blade, or after you do, use something a little thicker to blend it into the actual muscle area:

http://threads.rebelscum.com/showflat.p ... =1#3150742

check out that guys stuff, look at his shirtless characters(or partial ones), see how it looks like he makes a line at first, then he slowly smooths the line out to blend into the muscle part? Maybe if you made tiny little discs of the sculpting material and put them on the stomach where the abdominal muscles would be and then slowly smoothed them down to meet the rest of the stomach area, does that make sense?

http://threads.rebelscum.com/showflat.p ... art=1&vc=1

In the second link you can really see some progression shots, showing how much you can do when you take the time and work in steps.

Hope that helps, I do have to say the eyes look 100% better, so good job on that, but like the others have said, the chest and stomach area look like he's wearing a shirt with a body printed on it.


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 Post subject: Re: QUICK KICK MY 2ND TAKE updated
PostPosted: Wed May 28, 2008 4:01 pm 
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SteamPunk Michael wrote:
I think the chest looks like you're just cutting into the sculpting compound and that's it, so that's why it doesn't look right. If it was sculpted a little better, and didn't look like lines I think it'd look a lot better. Maybe go over it with a dremel sanding head(the one shaped like a cone) to widen the defined muscle area a little or some how get away from "cutting" the area with an exacto blade, or after you do, use something a little thicker to blend it into the actual muscle area:

http://threads.rebelscum.com/showflat.p ... =1#3150742

check out that guys stuff, look at his shirtless characters(or partial ones), see how it looks like he makes a line at first, then he slowly smooths the line out to blend into the muscle part? Maybe if you made tiny little discs of the sculpting material and put them on the stomach where the abdominal muscles would be and then slowly smoothed them down to meet the rest of the stomach area, does that make sense?

http://threads.rebelscum.com/showflat.p ... art=1&vc=1

In the second link you can really see some progression shots, showing how much you can do when you take the time and work in steps.

Hope that helps, I do have to say the eyes look 100% better, so good job on that, but like the others have said, the chest and stomach area look like he's wearing a shirt with a body printed on it.



Tim 121RVC thanks man im glad you dig him.now with the update.
SPM thanks for the tips. this was my first whole sculpt of a bear chest . but ill keep trying my hand at it. as for QK im done for now till i can make a better chest for him. thanks aginX

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