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 Post subject: 3060 cyborg wip
PostPosted: Sun May 11, 2008 3:22 am 
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Just wanted to get some crits and see what you all thought, Hows he looking? Still have abit to paint,and thinking to add some more to him.

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 Post subject: Re: 3060 cyborg wip
PostPosted: Sun May 11, 2008 5:18 am 
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Uh, SCARY enough!!! 8-O
Like a psycho Overkill or Mindbenders new combination of BAT, animal and soldier........
Is 3060 a comic or did you just wanted to make it sound "future"?
I see a Heat Viper hose and Laser Viper backpack. I cannot think of anything more to add, he already looks complete to me!

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 Post subject: Re: 3060 cyborg wip
PostPosted: Sun May 11, 2008 6:00 am 

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Heh, that`s cool as hell man. Nice use of Gundam parts here too!


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 Post subject: Re: 3060 cyborg wip
PostPosted: Sun May 11, 2008 7:44 am 
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Dave, this is a real treat seeing a custom from ya. I think he's fantastic looking. Love the flow of parts and the imagination put into him.

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 Post subject: Re: 3060 cyborg wip
PostPosted: Sun May 11, 2008 10:00 am 

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kinda reminds me of quake 2... Hmm there is a concept no jo chllenge... ID software games characters.


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 Post subject: Re: 3060 cyborg wip
PostPosted: Sun May 11, 2008 10:32 am 
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Outstanding work there! i like him very much!

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 Post subject: Re: 3060 cyborg wip
PostPosted: Sun May 11, 2008 10:46 am 

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Damn Slack nuts that might be the best damn custom your lazy ass has ever made! :wow:

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 Post subject: Re: 3060 cyborg wip
PostPosted: Sun May 11, 2008 11:47 am 
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Nice work, nice conceptualisation overall - but I'm not quite getting that head - or is it a helmet? Makes him look more like a demon from hell or an alien than a cyborg. I think it might need something more human+robot looking... like Robo-Joe or Psyche-Out v3, only a little more sinister. My 2¢.

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 Post subject: Re: 3060 cyborg wip
PostPosted: Sun May 11, 2008 1:02 pm 
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SPEC-FREAKIN-TACULAR !


I like it, get-r-done. :-P

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 Post subject: Re: 3060 cyborg wip
PostPosted: Sun May 11, 2008 6:59 pm 
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Very cool...It's great to see some signature G2G parts all being used in one custom.

Couple things...Like was said before I get a real Doom-Quake-ID software hellspawn feel from this guy...the integrated weapon arm and big stompy feet...clearly related to chain gun brain spiders...I think alot of that immagery comes from your choice of heads.

I've never understood the Silver skin = Cyborg thing I see going on here and in comics and such...The cyborg idea is mixing tech with nature...if the tech is advanced enough to make a skin tight layer of metal that moves like skin...It'd seem to me that there's the tech to repair the skin or avoid the obvious tactical disadvantages of having shiney metalic skin....The Borg always struck me as a near perfect envisioning of Cyborgs...A bulky...almost steampunk applicae of technology over top and in place of the flesh.

I love the use of the Gundam legs...an excellent choice and they work well for this concept...I think the transition from torso to feet could use some work though. Either build it out like an armored belt or cut it in like C-3PO's waist.....maybe also change up the paint scheme between torso and legs. Might be cool to see battle worn paint on the legs...Gundam parts always seem rather well suited to that type of weathering.

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 Post subject: Re: 3060 cyborg wip
PostPosted: Sun May 11, 2008 7:57 pm 
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Upper body looks awesome, especially the gun arm. Unfortunately the lower body looks too "re-purposed gundam". I think you're going to have to go nuts with the green stuff to take the Gundham "lines" off it, and make it blend better into the organic metal look of the torso.

The top looks good, the bottom looks good, but they don't seem to blend as is.

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 Post subject: Re: 3060 cyborg wip
PostPosted: Sun May 11, 2008 8:07 pm 
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When the image loaded all I could say was “whoa”.

That’s a hard-core looking custom you have there, like something out of Doom. My only gripe is with the legs. They look way too Gundamy but I’m sure that you can fix that. Also the fact that the torso and legs are the same color bugs me but if you add a belt or something to make the waist more defined is should be ok. Don’t change anything above the waist too much though, I freakin’ love it!


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 Post subject: Re: 3060 cyborg wip
PostPosted: Sun May 11, 2008 11:33 pm 

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looks neat Dave,needs some different colors to offset all the silver but cool.On the head some of the teeth should be silver and on the flesh arm maybe make some staples there.Add alittle to the chest to make it more robotic to match the legs more and you got a finished product I beleive.
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 Post subject: Re: 3060 cyborg wip
PostPosted: Mon May 12, 2008 3:22 pm 
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starviper wrote:
Nice work, nice conceptualisation overall - but I'm not quite getting that head - or is it a helmet? Makes him look more like a demon from hell or an alien than a cyborg. I think it might need something more human+robot looking... like Robo-Joe or Psyche-Out v3, only a little more sinister. My 2¢.
I agree with this. I think the top and bottom blend just fine, but the head doesn't make him look human at all. That's fine if that is what you were going for, but when I think cyborg I think human and robot, not laien demon and robot.

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 Post subject: Re: 3060 cyborg wip
PostPosted: Mon May 12, 2008 4:25 pm 
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The head is a helmet,I have a unhelmet head as well. I do need to add some more to him,I was thinking to repaint half the chest in flesh,to match the left arm.

Short bio:

He was a Human ,and when the Mechs attacked,during the BFW,He was blown in half. Thus why the lower half was fused to him,they were mech legs. His chest also took alot of damage,along with his right arm.

I was thinking to add some plates to his chest for dermel plate look,and some more cyber ware,just didnt want to do anything till I got some feedback.

Thanks all for the feedback,made me rethink some things,great suggestions.


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