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jedsoon
 Post subject: Flash!
PostPosted: Fri Feb 29, 2008 4:47 pm 
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 Post subject: Re: Flash!
PostPosted: Fri Feb 29, 2008 5:28 pm 
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Awesome pic!!!

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 Post subject: Re: Flash!
PostPosted: Fri Feb 29, 2008 7:28 pm 
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That's awesome! I love it.

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 Post subject: Re: Flash!
PostPosted: Fri Feb 29, 2008 7:32 pm 
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 Post subject: Re: Flash!
PostPosted: Fri Feb 29, 2008 7:54 pm 
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Awesome stuff. very well done. I am curious as to why you went with the burst of laser instead of a beam or bolt.

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 Post subject: Re: Flash!
PostPosted: Sat Mar 01, 2008 4:38 am 
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Yeah, the only thing that could make this cooler would be a beam effect.

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 Post subject: Re: Flash!
PostPosted: Sat Mar 01, 2008 1:45 pm 
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Love it! I like the burst effect and the face contrast btwn shots! Awesome.
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jedsoon
 Post subject: Re: Flash!
PostPosted: Sun Mar 02, 2008 10:28 pm 
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I guess i could have added another frame and gotten more of a beam, but i figured it's a shot moving at the speed of light and would move out of frame pretty quickly. If i'd kept it in frame longer, it would lack the speed that it currently has. It also didn't make sense to do even more work to achieve a less aesthetically pleasing (IMO) shot. I would say it's a burst as opposed to a beam.

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And that's a good thing :-)

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PostPosted: Mon Mar 03, 2008 11:08 am 
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Wooooooow How did you do that, is that like a gif? What kind of soft where do you need to do something like that?


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PostPosted: Tue Mar 04, 2008 3:40 pm 
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WILD.

You wanna' come to Florida and help me animate some dragons and customs? :-)

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 Post subject: Re: Flash!
PostPosted: Thu Mar 06, 2008 11:36 am 
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One of these days, Cap! One of these days...

I used photoshop to both arrange the frame order and add the lens flare. The only thing that made this particular shot at all complicated was my decision to operate the camera by hand rather than remote!

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