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AdrienVeidt
 Post subject: Universe Asunder: the Fist of Khonshu
PostPosted: Thu Jan 10, 2008 10:16 pm 
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Marc Spector, the Moon Knight.

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Lonewolf419
 Post subject: Re: Universe Asunder: the Fist of Khonshu
PostPosted: Thu Jan 10, 2008 10:35 pm 
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Very nice take on Moon Knight, AV. I like it.

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Keenan
 Post subject: Re: Universe Asunder: the Fist of Khonshu
PostPosted: Thu Jan 10, 2008 11:28 pm 
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Another winner. And my favorite part is the cape (I know you didn't care much for it). That really put this one over for me.

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Viper
 Post subject: Re: Universe Asunder: the Fist of Khonshu
PostPosted: Fri Jan 11, 2008 2:09 am 
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Very cool take on Moon Knight. I really like the cape, gives him a ragged mummy quality.
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poisonbladed
 Post subject: Re: Universe Asunder: the Fist of Khonshu
PostPosted: Fri Jan 11, 2008 3:17 am 
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That is does viper. But if you want to fix it did you try fray not or sewing glue?
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AdrienVeidt
 Post subject: Re: Universe Asunder: the Fist of Khonshu
PostPosted: Fri Jan 11, 2008 8:46 am 
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Thanks, all. I do like the raggedy nature of the cape. I was actually riffing the seam with my thumbnail when sealing it with FrayCheck to purposely get some loose threads sticking out here and there. I'm not liking the completely exposed and obvious wire. I see now I shoulda simply covered it up by making the cape as two layers stuck together with the wire in between; but I simply didn't think of it at the time. But, it's good info to keep in mind for the next caped guy I'm working on.

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Keenan
 Post subject: Re: Universe Asunder: the Fist of Khonshu
PostPosted: Fri Jan 11, 2008 9:09 am 
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You know I didn't notice the wire till you pointed it out.
Now I think it's crap ;-) .

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Viper
 Post subject: Re: Universe Asunder: the Fist of Khonshu
PostPosted: Fri Jan 11, 2008 10:08 am 
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JFAK075 wrote:
You know I didn't notice the wire till you pointed it out.
Now I think it's crap ;-) .

Ditto.
Cape downgraded from awesome to fail. :-P
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The pros from Dover
 Post subject: Re: Universe Asunder: the Fist of Khonshu
PostPosted: Fri Jan 11, 2008 12:31 pm 
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Say Jimbo,
Thats pretty frickin tight! I dig the concept and it looks great!

The vehicle is outstanding too!
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crowncoke
 Post subject: Re: Universe Asunder: the Fist of Khonshu
PostPosted: Fri Jan 11, 2008 2:06 pm 

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Awsome job on Specter! I really love the way you changed him, and IMO improved on him. Now my backstory sucks like a kindergarten one. Thanks!

I wish you could take some night shots of these customs.
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AdrienVeidt
 Post subject: Re: Universe Asunder: the Fist of Khonshu
PostPosted: Fri Jan 11, 2008 7:51 pm 
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Huh, that'll learn me to go admitting liabilities of my stuff, and to just nod my head affirmative when y'all kiss my ass. "That's right, pucker up".

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