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beav
 Post subject: Guard of the Ouroboros
PostPosted: Tue Oct 09, 2007 10:22 pm 
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Hi, beav. Playing cards?
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Head: Void cast
Torso: Strato-Viper
Arms: Windchill v1
Waist/Legs: Space Shot

Story: ???? (For now :shifty:)

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 Post subject: Re: Guard of the Ouroboros
PostPosted: Tue Oct 09, 2007 10:23 pm 
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i can dig it! prolly dig it more once ya get a story on him ;-)

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 Post subject: Re: Guard of the Ouroboros
PostPosted: Wed Oct 10, 2007 12:03 am 
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I like the look but I think he needs his neck stretched.
Who's his buddy?

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Viper
 Post subject: Re: Guard of the Ouroboros
PostPosted: Wed Oct 10, 2007 12:32 am 
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Very cool. Maybe an Ouroboros on his right sleeve?
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Taliesin Crow
 Post subject: Re: Guard of the Ouroboros
PostPosted: Wed Oct 10, 2007 9:54 am 
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He looks to me like a heavy arms Crimson Guard, I could totally see having 5 or 10 of those guys mixed in with 20 or 30 CG's
Nice work, and great to see you back at it. ;)

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beav
 Post subject: Re: Guard of the Ouroboros
PostPosted: Wed Oct 10, 2007 10:13 am 
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Hi, beav. Playing cards?
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danielb wrote:
I like the look but I think he needs his neck stretched.


Popped collar, plus that junk around his shoulders give the illusion of a short neck. Plus he's stocky. :-P

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pluv
 Post subject: Re: Guard of the Ouroboros
PostPosted: Wed Oct 10, 2007 1:31 pm 
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Yeah that works. More battle ready than a regular CG but not quite suited for the Battle Field like the CGI's. This will work for your purposes nicely.

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nova
 Post subject: Re: Guard of the Ouroboros
PostPosted: Wed Oct 10, 2007 1:59 pm 
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Color and details look good...I like the head/torso combo...but I'd change the thighs. I think the blank thighs give him a JVC porportions lool (long legs, short torso) some thighs with a bit more details would break up that long leg look he's got going on.

Looking forward to hearing what you've got planned for a bio.

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 Post subject: Re: Guard of the Ouroboros
PostPosted: Thu Oct 11, 2007 11:33 pm 
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I definitely like the look of this guy. Can't wait for the bio/story.

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 Post subject: Re: Guard of the Ouroboros
PostPosted: Sun Oct 14, 2007 4:28 pm 
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I think the parts work well together, but the detailing with the paint apps, really makes him great. Nice job.

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Lev
 Post subject: Re: Guard of the Ouroboros
PostPosted: Mon Oct 15, 2007 11:35 am 
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I like the figure, but I still can't figure out how to pronounce Ouroboros.

"Guard of the Aurora Borealis"
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