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 Post subject: line art from Rodrigo
PostPosted: Tue May 05, 2009 11:28 am 

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Hello everyone,

Here are some pictures I´ve done,
please let me know what you think ok?

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 Post subject: Re: line art from Rodrigo
PostPosted: Tue May 05, 2009 1:35 pm 
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The only thing I'm not liking is how Snake Eyes is somehow screaming through his mask. Otherwise, absolutely great. I love the last pic of the Dreadnoks.

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 Post subject: Re: line art from Rodrigo
PostPosted: Tue May 05, 2009 7:51 pm 
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I can dig em, solid panel work, and you don't skimp on the backgrounds....


got alot of top comic guys beat on that alone.

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 Post subject: Re: line art from Rodrigo
PostPosted: Tue May 05, 2009 10:22 pm 

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I like 'em. Could be just me but something about the scans may be making the darks too light and the lights too dark...aka too many midlevel greys that aren't showing up as well.

But pretty good use of angles for the panels in the bottom scan. Gives it a nice security camera viewpoint of the break-in.

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 Post subject: Re: line art from Rodrigo
PostPosted: Wed May 06, 2009 1:39 am 
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for an art teachers perspective:

I love the use of different angles and perception in the third page, especially the "Dramatic" angle on the Dreadnoks panel.

great use of shadows and light source (Can't wait to see what you do for Inks)

I like the poses, and the action flow.

my only critiques, I agree on Darko's critique on Snake Eye's mask/ scream.

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 Post subject: Re: line art from Rodrigo
PostPosted: Wed May 06, 2009 7:17 am 

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Good stuff!


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 Post subject: Re: line art from Rodrigo
PostPosted: Wed May 06, 2009 7:45 am 
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Can't but agree with the others. Great work. Great lines!

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 Post subject: Re: line art from Rodrigo
PostPosted: Wed May 06, 2009 8:13 am 
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great drawings for sure! You've definitely got some talent there. But I'm aslo not getting the snake eyes mouth-scream-thing. Never pictured the character's mouth showing through his mask.

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 Post subject: Re: line art from Rodrigo
PostPosted: Fri May 08, 2009 12:27 pm 

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Hey, Thanks very much everyone for the comments, I really appreciate it!!

here are new pics hope you all enjoy them :)

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 Post subject: Re: line art from Rodrigo
PostPosted: Sat May 09, 2009 9:48 am 
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 Post subject: Re: line art from Rodrigo
PostPosted: Sat May 09, 2009 11:27 pm 
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These are fantastic!!

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 Post subject: Re: line art from Rodrigo
PostPosted: Mon May 11, 2009 6:40 pm 

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Hello,

Thanks very much.


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 Post subject: Re: line art from Rodrigo
PostPosted: Mon May 11, 2009 8:12 pm 
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All I can say is wow. These are fantastic. Any chance that you would sell priints of the top one of Snake Eyes, Roadblock and Duke. I also really like the bottom one of the Dreadnoks. These are really awesome and would be a great addition to anu collection. I love the detail and the fact that they remind of the original comic art from the 80's. Once again totally fantastic.

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 Post subject: Re: line art from Rodrigo
PostPosted: Tue May 12, 2009 10:05 pm 

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Stormavik wrote:
All I can say is wow. These are fantastic. Any chance that you would sell priints of the top one of Snake Eyes, Roadblock and Duke. I also really like the bottom one of the Dreadnoks. These are really awesome and would be a great addition to anu collection. I love the detail and the fact that they remind of the original comic art from the 80's. Once again totally fantastic.



Hello,

Thanks very much and of course. if you are interested on anything at all that you may want please send me an e-mail and let me know and we can talk further, ok?

rodrigoramosrodolfo@yahoo.com.br

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 Post subject: Re: line art from Rodrigo
PostPosted: Fri May 15, 2009 12:53 pm 

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here are a few more:

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