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Fett80
 Post subject: What is wrong??
PostPosted: Wed Aug 15, 2007 3:36 pm 
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I have sculpted this helmet and visor this weekend but I dont really like it buit I cant tell what is wrong with it. Can you guys help me what could make it better :-(


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DarkJedi
 Post subject: Re: What is wrong??
PostPosted: Wed Aug 15, 2007 3:55 pm 
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I think he appears too "Captain Britain", but without knowing what the custom is to be...


What don't you like about it?

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Keenan
 Post subject: Re: What is wrong??
PostPosted: Wed Aug 15, 2007 4:08 pm 
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Looks good. Maybe a little large, but that's it.

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Lev
 Post subject: Re: What is wrong??
PostPosted: Wed Aug 15, 2007 4:14 pm 
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Yeah, I'd say the only thing wrong here is the size of the thing.
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pluv
 Post subject: Re: What is wrong??
PostPosted: Wed Aug 15, 2007 5:21 pm 
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I don't have a problem with the size. To me the painting seems crooked. I've attached two pics, the one witht he green lines show the lack of symmetry in your design while the pink shows how things should have lined up.

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AdrienVeidt
 Post subject: Re: What is wrong??
PostPosted: Wed Aug 15, 2007 5:57 pm 
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Before repainting, I'd do some filing down of some areas to make it shaped more like this:

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joemichaels70
 Post subject: Re: What is wrong??
PostPosted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 9:40 am 
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with AV's photoshop work, i'm getting an early 'rocketeer' vibe from that helmet. that would be cool.

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Fett80
 Post subject: Re: What is wrong??
PostPosted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 2:32 pm 
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Thanks guys for the tips! I am rescuplting it right now and he sould be alot smaller and have a more agressive look :-D
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