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 Post subject: Beachhead
PostPosted: Mon Aug 06, 2007 11:34 am 
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Parts:
Head: Tiger Claw
Torso: Depth charge
Arms: Dial Tone filed down to fit new sculpt
Legs: Long Range (ROCC)
Vest: Comic Pack Rebel Trooper

Notes: I used the Depth Charge body because it resembles a rash guard, and as Beachhead would probably train all troops in basic water operations, he would just wear a rashguard as a shirt.

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 Post subject: Re: Beachhead
PostPosted: Mon Aug 06, 2007 1:33 pm 
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Looks good so far, other than the vest is too much of a color difference between the torso/head/legs.

I didn't seen if you had classified these as WIPs or whether these were final...

One suggestion would be avoiding the 'security cam POV' that seems prevalent in your pics. Can you lower the camera or raise the figure up so we can see a more straight-on view?

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 Post subject: Re: Beachhead
PostPosted: Mon Aug 06, 2007 2:12 pm 
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Yeah, he definitely needs a more cohesive paint job. Interesting parts choice.
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