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 Post subject: My Steampunk World: Crimson Guard
PostPosted: Tue May 27, 2008 11:00 pm 
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I joined the site to be a part of the latest Group Project, but I joined a little too late, and I wasn't able to finish in time. But I still wanted to finish what I started and show it here.

I originally started 2 customs, but when it was looking grim, I stopped on the second and tried to rush and finish the first one I started. When the time had already passed and I knew I wasn't going to make it, I tried to spruce him up a little more and gave him a custom weapon and belt, and then kept it going with a custom stand. I didn't quite finish the whole stand and rather than keep drawing it out, I said the heck with it, and thought I'd just post what I have right now.

Crimson Guard:
Body-25th comic pack CG
Arms, hands & coat-Indy German w/bike
Belt-Star Wars Clone(the camo biker scout)
Belt tank-25th Dreadnok form comic pack's backpack(I forget who's who) with hook up made from misc gun parts
Stand-Danger Girl stand & 25th Cobra Stand with sculpted rocks, train diorama sand, dirt and turf
"Gun"-Star Wars rifle with knife added, tanks from GI Joe paintballs and tubes from packaging twists with wire taken out.

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In person the lower jacket looks nice and blends well with the upper body, I think the flash makes it look off, maybe I need to hit it with another coat of dull coat. I also didn't like how the backpack was hollow looking, sticking out over his shoulders, so I traced over it on a piece pf packaging bubble and then cut, sanded and trimmed it to fit and then painted it and it looks 100% better even if it's only barely noticeable, it just bothered me(maybe that's why I didn't finish it in time :-/ ).

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here's a view without the gun, I took another one of the back without the pack, but it was too blurry.

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Here's the best I could get with the weapon and the stand, I couldn't zoom in too much, but I think it's pretty good enough to see the detail. The knife on the front was kind of a last min idea to make it look a little more like the original gun, and the gold was too to break up the silver, but I'm glad I did, I think it looks way better.

All in all, I'm pretty happy with him, I have another set of figures to make another one to pilot the SNAKE I was going to try to make with the Iron Monger V2 figure. I think I'll take more time with the next one, take him all the way apart, sand down his joints and try to make him as movable as possible. Maybe I'll just say screw it and sculpt over the joints and make little statues, after all, that's what I'm used to in the past, painting RPG miniatures, but we'll see.

Have at it, I just started Critiquing and thought I'd hold off on critiquing the rest of the group project till I posted my figure, so now, I can go back to finishing that, let me know what you think, if there's something don't like, something you'd improve on, or whatever, any input is appreciated.

Thanks,
Mike


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 Post subject: Re: My Steampunk World: Crimson Guard
PostPosted: Tue May 27, 2008 11:59 pm 
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Nice use of parts. I'd love to see it in person. Since I can't, how about a shot with no flash (to show how the coat blends)?

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 Post subject: Re: My Steampunk World: Crimson Guard
PostPosted: Wed May 28, 2008 12:07 am 
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i think that is an absolute win! the modded weapon really pushes it over the edge, and if the browns match better in person, then it's downright SP!

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 Post subject: Re: My Steampunk World: Crimson Guard
PostPosted: Wed May 28, 2008 12:14 am 
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Here's one I took before with a desk lamp, that's the best I could do.

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 Post subject: Re: My Steampunk World: Crimson Guard
PostPosted: Wed May 28, 2008 12:49 am 
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I like that, a lot! The darker red and the long coat really add to the overall look. I'm also a sucker for tubes and hoses on action figures. Great use of twist ties. 'bout time those things served a usefull purpose.

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 Post subject: Re: My Steampunk World: Crimson Guard
PostPosted: Wed May 28, 2008 2:40 am 

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Very nice!! I love it! Great choice of accessories!


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 Post subject: Re: My Steampunk World: Crimson Guard
PostPosted: Wed May 28, 2008 6:39 am 
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I was really intrigued by the whole steampunk idea. I don't really know a whole lot about it, but this guy looks like he fits in perfectly. I love the subdued colors and the gun is really cool! Great creative use of what's around you! ;) I love that you even went so far as to detail the stand...it looks very realistic and offsets the custom nicely. He looks like he stepped out of a time machine and this is the kind of custom that makes my imagination run wild! :)

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 Post subject: Re: My Steampunk World: Crimson Guard
PostPosted: Wed May 28, 2008 7:22 am 
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i want some to add to my already large Crimson Guard army
he is awesome!
love the weapon and the use of the knife, that coat is the best addition to the figure i think!
all in all excellent job!


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 Post subject: Re: My Steampunk World: Crimson Guard
PostPosted: Wed May 28, 2008 11:07 am 
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Awesome Idea and execution...

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 Post subject: Re: My Steampunk World: Crimson Guard
PostPosted: Wed May 28, 2008 12:12 pm 
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Very cool. The only thing I would change is to paint the neck so when he is viewed from the side the fleshy bits don't distract from the flow of it.

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 Post subject: Re: My Steampunk World: Crimson Guard
PostPosted: Wed May 28, 2008 12:27 pm 
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Thanks for the second photo. The coat blends amazingly. Very very sweet custom.

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 Post subject: Re: My Steampunk World: Crimson Guard
PostPosted: Wed May 28, 2008 12:38 pm 
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joemichaels70 wrote:
i think that is an absolute win! the modded weapon really pushes it over the edge, and if the browns match better in person, then it's downright SP!
I agree. The coloring is perfect. You'd probably have to change the name of the character though since they aren't Crimson anymore.

The gun is fantastic. I like everything about esepcially the tubing. I don't know when but I'm going to use that idea somewhere down the road.

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 Post subject: Re: My Steampunk World: Crimson Guard
PostPosted: Wed May 28, 2008 1:02 pm 
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I'll delurk long enough to say outstanding! This is a solid custom and the backpack and gun push it over the top. I think I might try this on a few of mine. The use of the twist ties and paintball guns is so stolen.........I'd love to see more of your work posted up.

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 Post subject: Re: My Steampunk World: Crimson Guard
PostPosted: Wed May 28, 2008 1:51 pm 
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I love Steampunk, and this totally fills the bill. Great execution, I love the small details on the gun and I just caught the cuffs on the sleeves, very nice.

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 Post subject: Re: My Steampunk World: Crimson Guard
PostPosted: Wed May 28, 2008 1:57 pm 
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thats very cool nice job. he looks great.

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